ToritheMonster

Oh my goodness, piggies! I might be the only person who loves pigs as much as Snoink... Welcome to the site, luv! You'll enjoy it here, I can guarantee it. ...

I find that a whole novel in 2nd person gets frustrating to read. It's probably even more frustrating to write. I suggest, if you're going to use that POV, that ...

Silent, yours is done. I'll get to the others ASAP! Did I quintuple post there? Whoops.

Thanks! Actually, half the time, even I don't know what I'm trying to say. I just sort of write the words as they come to me, and sometimes they have ...

Iiscrafty, I think the point of this is that he IS dead. He and the baby dies, and somehow the Giver did too. I liked this! I think it tied ...

Here's another one (it's a shorty): Equations of the Mind Shall I spin a spider web? Imagination’s eyes are blind These everlasting filaments Equations of the mind.

So, here's where I plan to post all the random poetry I write in my free time. But be warned! None of these poems makes any sense. They are, for ...

I didn't even know emo people had their own poetry... I feel mildly offended. Well, this wasn't bad! It just... wasn't amazing. Okay fine. I'll be honest with you because ...

Heya! Wow, this is weird. Now I'll never know who anyone's talking to when they say Dreamy. Well, you can just call me Tori. Dandy, eh? Welcome to the site!Oh, ...

Bloody brilliant, mate. *likes*

Picnics. We used to have them near my town's gazebo. Or rotisserie chicken Cuz we'd eat it at our picnics.

Haha, thanks, Jabs! That actually was how I ended it originally, but my friend told me I should make it more clear that the judge knew it was the man ...

Thank you so much! I'm off to edit it now.

Thanks so much! Yeeah, it's pretty much a quote from the original. That helped a lot. Thank you!

So, for a school assignment, we had to rewrite the short story "Lather and Nothing Else" by Hernando Tellez with a plot twist and in a different location. I placed ...