ToritheMonster

@Wolf: Thanks! I actually had it originally reading "through" but I always found myself drawing out the word to make the line flow when reading it out loud, so I ...

Thanks. Would you mind explaining what you found confusing so I can fix it?

Banned for having no gender.

Thank you!

Thank you so much everyone!

Ha, thanks everyone! Yeah, I was getting sick of everyone calling each other names like they were going to eat each other, and all those poems that make the girl ...

So, here's my crack at writing something vaguely humourous. ___________________________________________________________ My sweet , he whispered in my ear Fingers on my temples bare Good enough to eat

Chocolate covered cherries and some earl grey tea.

Thank you!

Thanks you all very much for the detailed reviews! @Maddy- Thank you very much! I'll break up all that text soon. I actually have no idea if all the information ...

This is extremely good! I don't really have any edits. This poem really rang true, and it's beautifully written. Why not try turning it into a villanelle? It would be ...

Thanks! Yeah, I've always been a bit too wordy in my works. I might go back and edit it a bit.

Thanks, and welcome to YWS!

Thanks!

Thanks