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ToritheMonster

  • Other Poetry Re: You died, tonight.

    My friends were reading this over mny shoulder and we were confused as to why this would ever be a featured work untill we saw the end- lovely job :D. ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: All There Is

    Thanks! Actually, the style of a villanelle is to have three line stanzas with two repeating refrains, ending in a four line stanza with both refrains repeated. Actually, I have ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Beauty

    Hiya, and welcome to the site. I'm Tori, and I'll give you a quick review. Also, just so you know, please try to avoid chatspeak on the site. As we're ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Crafty's review thread

    Mind looking at my poem? Thanks!

    Jan 2, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Welcome to the Reviewing Machine [OPEN]

    I'd be thrilled if you checked out my poem: Thanks!!!!!

    Jan 2, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: All There Is

    Thank you both. Actually, I hate villanelles, which is what this poem is. It's a type of french poem that follows a pattern with two refrains repeated in an ABAABAABAABAABAABAA ...

    Dec 31, 2010
  • General Articles Re: How to be Awkward

    I have not laughed so hard in a long time.... :D Lovely work, mate. You have real talent with humour. If this was last minute, I'd hate to see how ...

    Dec 31, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: RAWR!...Ahem. Would You Like A Review? (CLOSED)

    I'd greatly appreciate it if you could take a look at my poem. Thanks!

    Dec 31, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Looking for stuff to review!

    I s'pose I'll get you started. Would you mind taking at look at my poem? Thanks, luv!

    Dec 31, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: All There Is

    Here's a villanelle I wrote. I hate villanelles, but we had to do one for school. ____________________________________________________________________ Stumble blindly into arms of His Fear, the heart

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Fourth Period

    Well, learn something new every day. If you intended it to be humourous, then nice work. Very good poem.

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Archive Re: Dragon Riders II: Revenge of the Riders (started, accepting)

    Eighth- "Did you miss me?" I sneered, Bree sending a lightning bolt inches from Phobos. I hopped off his back onto the ground. Advantages were unnecessary. I watched as the ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • General Articles Re: 5 Reasons Why YWS Is Better Than Every Other Website

    Sucks to you, Facebook! Preach, mate. Lovely work.

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Fourth Period

    Hey there! 'fraid I don't have time for a very long review, but I can give you a quicky. I really liked this poem! I can absolutely relate to not ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Tabooboo - A parody of Taboo

    ahhhh.... I'm still laughing...... awesome job, you nutter!

    Dec 27, 2010


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