ToritheMonster

^ ditto

This is absolutely lovely. The way it's written gives it an almost eerie, haunting feel. It's really deep and very sad. Amazing work. I'd give it nitpicks, but I honestly ...

To shorten up the line "So please go away and have a diction themed party," You could condense it to "So leave now and have a diction party". That is ...

Ditto to Yoda: 42. It's the meaning of life, the universe and everything. We just don't know the question yet. ;)

Very funny! This poem is very clever, and a cute read. My only problem is that at times your lines get a little cramped. You should make sure you have ...

This is amazing! I just suggest working on the neck/ chin area. His head is at a bit of an odd angle and there's not really any space between the ...

Gracias! I might just make those changes.

I probably made this much harder for myself than it should have been. But after about 4 hours of tampering in Gimp2, I designed these..... And yeah. I still messed ...

Oh my dear sweet Jesus on high..... this is bloody brilliant. I can't even make edits because it's so.... amazing. You have crazy amounts of talent. Please keep writing poetry- ...

This is very good! As other people have said, it's kind of disproportionate under then neckline. I think it's very nice overall. It could be improved if you added some ...

YWS has really changed my life. It's given me so much knowledge on writing, expanded my skills, and I've made some great friends. I have so many people I should ...

This was bloody brilliant. I'll be back to review it later.

Hey Timmeh! I liked this poem. I'd give you a full review, but I'm tight on time. Your wording is lovely , but your rhyme metre gets messed up in ...

Thanks.

Thank you!