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Re: To Drew
Hey! I actually really liked this. Kinda a kick in the face to that drunken Drew guy- who was obviously a douc... er, not nice person. This was simple, but ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Heartbreak
Yoyo! Tori here. So; this poem didn't strike me as anything special or original. Just another sad break-up poem. Been there; done that. You had a consistent rhyme scheme, though, ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Welcome To Our Society
I really liked this poem! You have a few little nitpicks that you can catch just reading it over a few times. However, I really loved it overall. It rings ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Wondrous Mother Earth
Okay, Tori here! I apologise in advance for the harsh review. Take it with a grain of salt. So; I didn't like this poem. The purple and bold and italics ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: How'd you discover YWS?
My friend saw a story on here and had me read it. I was about 9 at the time... I didn't like the story; but I remembered the site. When ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Two Hypocrites
So, this is far too lengthy for a nitpick review; but I didn't really have any nitpicks. So it's okay. Overall; this is a very good poem! I love your ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Holy Communion
Ha, as I was reading this, I thought 'Gee, this sounds like a Lady Gaga type song.' and then I read the spoiler. So, overall, this isn't a bad poem. ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Return to Wonderland *Not accepting anymore Descendants*
^double postage :P
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Return to Wonderland *Not accepting anymore Descendants*
^ run ons X.X
May 1, 2011 -
Re: YWS group photo!
Can I be draco malfoy? Like my avvie? Short with blonde bowl-cut?
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Tori draws?
Thank you! It's actually just No. 2 pencil and sharpie. The darkest parts are sharpie; the lighter ones are pencil. I drew the girl on a white background; and then ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Answer a question with a question game
Is it wrong to take candy from a baby?
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish [3]
Granted; but she's one of those sledgehammer wives who drives you insane and you hate her. I wish I hadn't corrupted my little brother by showing him Zombieland.
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: It got Verbed
8/10 he doesn't even deserve a verb. I had to headphone my ears to block out the terrible screeching of those goshdarn babies.
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Answer a question with a question game
What is the right thing to do?
Apr 30, 2011
