-
Re: The Princess
no offense, but it sounds like you just wanted an excuse to write a murder story. A murder has to have some depth-- this didn't. entwine some more facts and ...
Nov 18, 2009 -
Re: Back to Square One. (2)
woah... creepy. Needs some work, but overall entertaining.
Nov 18, 2009 -
Re: A few feet under (chapter -1)
hmmmm... it's alright, but the very first sentence is very Twilight-like.
Nov 18, 2009 -
Re: My first story-- about 1/4 of it, anyway. Part 1.
sorry if there's any random words or comments written in-- my friend was helping me edit. no title yet. Humans are curious beings:inquisitive, sensitive, rash. The foolish, stupid creatures think ...
Nov 18, 2009