ToritheMonster

Well, this is quite good. Review time!!!!!!!! I was not too bad looking; this is very modern-sounding for the time. friends and start having a conversation. you don't need anything ...

Wow, this poem was really good. I love how the narrator's memories are very bittersweet, and how one side of her brain views the man as charming, the other as ...

I gotta say, this is probably one of the best poems I have ever read on YWS. Yous style is amazing, your meter flawless, and your imagery was intriguing. I ...

Hi! Well, first of all, I have a comment to make: This really should either go in Fan Fiction or Romantic Fiction. Also, this was a lot of text to ...

Come on..... somebody review???????????????? Please?????????????????????????

Hi there, Camryn! Welcome to YWS. *hands cookie* I'm sure that you'll love it here! And now I'll just go over the rules. 1) The 3:1 Ratio. Basically it's recommended ...

Wow! This was really, really good. i couldn't really find any problems with it, other than some easy grammar mistakes the you could catch if you just go over it. ...

Hi! I only have time for a quick review. Here goes: Overall, this was very good. However, you use an extra "Did god" in the first stanza, which is unnecessary. ...

Where does she live? Sara wondered. Nerezza had never said anything about a home or a family (she had said a total of 18 words her entire time at the ...

Thanks everyone! I made a lot of changes, and I hope it's better now. :mrgreen:

Yep, it was my kitty (don't worry). Thanks!

hmm...I don't really see the point of this poem. What are you trying to get across? Your imagery is very good, though.

Nice work! i don't have time to do a full review, but a few points: --you have many easily fixable grammar and punctuation mistakes. -- You don't put paragraphs between ...

What's this? A new member? Ooh, fresh meat! OK, so your poem isn't that bad, but it's pretty far from good. Your style is kind of confusing, jumping around, switching ...

Ooh, a poem with an interesting title! *reads* OK, here's the verdict: I thought the poem flowed nicely, and the lines were well balanced. However, I began rhyming at the ...