ToritheMonster

Hi! Alright, I can kind of see what you wanted to do here from what you just posted... and I'm sorry, but you didn't pull it off. What you ended ...

Thanks! Yes, I definitely need to clarify some points. I was trying to make it sound like Sara had gone slightly insane, hence the worship, but I'll add in some ...

Sara stayed in her room until Monday, locking the doors and windows. Nerezza didn’t eat, so neither would she. Her mom had screamed and banged on the door, but had ...

Thanks! Don't worry, there's much, much more to come. And also, if you don't see me making any of the changes you say here, I really am. However, I do ...

Hmm.... this sounds fun. Now I just have to wait a year. *pulls out calendar* ...... This is gonna be longer than I thought.

Thanks! Yes, I'm trying to make it sound like she's going insane and her mind isn't all right-- maybe i need to clarify more. She's not really supposed to be ...

Thanks! Well.... Sara is slowly going insane, as you will see. And, very soon, you will find out just why Nerezza is in school and just what she has to ...

Thanks for the review. Yes, the original version on my computer has all thoughts in italics, but it doesn't work on YWS. And, yes, i know that my whole"popular" view ...

This was really sweet. I think I'm just horrifically overtired, but i got kinda teary-eyed.A few pointers before the actual edits: --I think it would be nice if Jim was ...

Thanks! Yes, you kinda have to read the other 7 sections to understand what's going on. You'll find them if you click back a page or two. And I understand ...

Sara’s head spun and her ears buzzed. She knew she was losing too much blood, but she enjoyed the sensation. She was aware of the pain, but she floated above ...

*hugs Seraph* thanks for the review. Part 8 , fresh outta the oven, coming up.

More hugs to anyone else who reviews! :D :mrgreen: :smt003 :smt004 --Dreamy :elephant:

Thanks! *hugs Fruits* yup, part 8, coming soon!

spiderwebbed/ing (i misspelled it in the original)= cracks spreading in a spider-web pattern on a breaking piece of glass. Like, if a baseball goes partway through a window, and the ...