ToritheMonster

Hi! I really liked this poem.I, personally, didn't mind the fact that you repeated the phrase "the dishwasher's bane" because I think it added flow. That's just my personal opinion, ...

Thanks, Ben and July!

I totally agree with Ben. You strike me as a happy person, mirror your poems to that! Also, fix up your punctuation. You have a couple of commas that should ...

Hai! I totally agree with what Ben said. Fix your punctuation, and you'll have a good base. After that, work on your meter. It was kind of roundabout. Then, add ...

Hey! Well, I think you have a good base here. It's not well written, but it shows the promise of a very good poem if you work on. After you ...

Hey! Well, this wasn't very well written, but the message you put across was nice. The 3rd section of lines? Well, you used fun twice. Your meter was actually kinda ...

Beautiful job! This was awesome, and I really enjoyed reading it. Follow Pen's advice, and this will be absolutely amazing. I think your title is fine, you don't have to ...

Hey! Nice job on this, it was really good. However, I would prefer Alaska doesn't die. There's something cliche about killing off the MC, and you're better than that. Awesome ...

Hi! Okay, I don't know much Filipino, but the gist of this was that the kid was giving a speech for his school? Please don't post in other languages without ...

Please? Just one review????????

nope, not yet. I still hafta write it.

Hey! Contest? When? Cuz I'm still Tori, and I'd still appreciate death by safety scissors. Or a knife in the back.

This was awesome! As the proud owner of the world's sweetest (and probably one of the oldest) kitties, I totally love cat stories. I can't wait to see how this ...

Oh! You're the apple!You might want to clarify that. I was confused. Actually, the whole thing was pretty confusing. You might want to do some re-writing, because It's not all ...

Aw1 This was sweet. You were emotional without really trying to be. My only suggestion? "Juice it up," as i seem to be saying to everyone increasingly often. Add some ...