ToritheMonster

Hey Belle, welcome to YWS! Ah, I love short posts. They give room for detailed reviews. Here goes, my corrections/comments in reddish pink: Have you ever wondered if life was ...

If you click the "view more smilies" button, there's tons more smilies! I can't believe it took me almost 4 months to figure that out! That's why other people have ...

Hi! Dreamy here!I'll be your reviewer today. On to your poem! I thought it was nice. My main problem: your punctuation. In some spots you had it, some you didn't ...

Hiya, welcome to YWS! Oh my gosh, I definitely want to know your favorite pie. And, you seem to be a pirate person... what would you do If I mentioned ...

Brilliant. Pure brilliance. Your skills awe me. --Dreamy

Come on!

Hi! Welcome to YWS! As Layla said, this is a tad too long. I'd split it into three parts. That way you can get really detailed reviews on each one. ...

That was...really scary. Good, though. So, how does she remember killing him? You don't have any memories until you are three. And how did she have a knife, if she ...

Aw! This was so sweet. I was bracing myself for another cliche break-up ending, but you gave me a happy one! That was great. I love happy endings. I don't ...

pleasyplease?????????

I totally agree with Prokayote. After I read her (his? sorry, i can't tell, there's no gender specified in the avatar) review, I though: "Wait. This main character was a ...

All right, as the biggest Killers fan on earth, I appreciated your little song "snippets" or whispers.Just make sure you credit them, as you kinda have. I liked this, it ...

Please? :smt064

I sort of agree with kimithy. There are lots of poems like this out there.That said,I enjoyed this one. It's fine if you "copied" those first lines, I mean, it's ...

Hey guys, I've had lots of people who've been reviewing my other parts of my story... and nobody (besides Seraph, thanks Seraph :D ) has really done any reviews of ...