ToritheMonster

...Dreamy115 crash in through the ceiling. "One martini, please." She ordered. "You're 13." Nate replied. Dreamy115 angrily jumped back through the large hole she had made in the ceiling. Then, ...

6/10

Thanks for the review. Yes, it's supposed to be creepy. And, I know you haven't read the other parts, so some stuff might not make sense. For starters, Sara's parents ...

Done!

Alrighty, I'm ba-ack!Let's get right to it, you know the drill. :smt016 King Jairon sat in his study, poring over reports. The room was one of the most lavish in ...

Hey everyone! This is my last installment for now-- I have to type up more! Please review! “I’m… confused.” Sara murmured. “I will give you a miniscule amount of my ...

Whoa... as soon as I wrote that... all but greens and oranges disappeared! Cool, I guess.

But... I still see colors on my computer....hm... Are you seeing purple and blue, or just greens and oranges? I'm seeing everything!

some students went to the ice-cream stand for lunch...

Thankee for ze review.

Done! Sorry if it isn't long... the person before me took all my nitpicks. ;)

Hey! Alright, Kanen caught most of the problems I had with this... and this was pretty well written anyway. Just make sure you use question marks where they're needed. You ...

But... I still see colors on my computer....hm...

Hi! Okay, my review's in the spoiler, my corrections/comments are in reddish pink. Asterisks mean I took something out. Ben wasn't an outgoing person. This is why he amazed himself ...

Done!