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  • Archive Re: Hell On Earth

    Victoria For a while, I hated myself. Why hadn't I asked for help when I had first gotten the leg wound? Now I had to lie in a bed, listening ...

    Mar 19, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Dreamy Reviews *paused, see thread*

    Done!

    Mar 18, 2010
  • Archive Re: Hell On Earth

    Victoria I woke up on a bunk. I threw off the sheet on me. I didn't need special treatment. My leg stopped was crusted with blood, and it throbbed. So ...

    Mar 18, 2010
  • Archive Re: Hell On Earth

    *Yay! I'm being saved! Thanks, Scar! May I call you that?It seems appropriate for this storybook...*

    Mar 18, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Can you see me? (Prologue)

    Here I am as requested!Corrections/comments in red, an asterisk means I took something out. I was seven years old when I first met my older sister, my deceased older sister, ...

    Mar 18, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: 4 minutes

    XD

    Mar 18, 2010
  • Archive Re: The JTC

    I have no idea. That's up to you ;)

    Mar 18, 2010
  • Archive Re: Hell On Earth

    *ooooh fine. if nobody saves me, I'll just wake up and scream until someone does. Or something like that.*

    Mar 18, 2010
  • Archive Re: The JTC

    ohhh sorry. I didn't read it that carefully. But he should be really weak... probably not in much of a talking mood... plus, Scarlett, he knows your little sister is ...

    Mar 18, 2010
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: Rhythms of Chaos

    *Darkkon* My minions made quick work of the village. Next, we moved towards the city. WE would take them by surprise. And then nothing would stop me from taking over ...

    Mar 18, 2010
  • Archive Re: Hell On Earth

    *pssst! you guys! i'm passed out near the camp! cuz i lost too much blood from my leg! I'm not there! Someone has to find me!*

    Mar 18, 2010
  • Archive Re: The JTC

    Ummm.. Scarlett? Rory is in the experiment room right now...on the verge of death... you might wanna read some of the previous posts.

    Mar 18, 2010
  • Archive Re: Hell On Earth

    *Victoria* I stumbled over to camp. I was right. I was going to lose too much blood and pass out. Oh...well... I was seeing black spots. Like little flies... I ...

    Mar 18, 2010
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: Rhythms of Chaos

    Darkkon Night had fallen. It was time. I steered my raft to the mainland, and stepped off. My minions trailed behind, as the serpent began his attacks. The largest of ...

    Mar 18, 2010
  • OOC Archive Re: Garadeth DT.

    "Today, a button fell off the bosom of a cloak. I cried." "What's a bosom?"

    Mar 18, 2010


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