ToritheMonster

Hi there! So, this is an okay poem. It does have a dream-like feel to it, which was your goal. It gives me a good mental picture of a foggy ...

Le Review: You'd think After all my fights and struggles That I'd get stronger (hm. Not the most gripping opener.) But I am not I am getting weak and frail ...

Okay... so I really don't get this. The constant use of ... is distracting, and using a ton of periods isn't going to make me not notice how poorly written ...

Well, hi there! Le Review: Winging its lonely way (is 'winging' actually a verb? I don't like it.) Onward toward the horizon. Never a permanent denizen, But ever soaring away. ...

Hi there! I won't do nitpicks because it's been done and you said you don't care about grammar and spelling anywho. I'll just tell you my thoughts: I really liked ...

Le review: I'm lost on the road of life, Just trying to survive. I don't know where I am, But I'll find my way home again. (This is an okay ...

Hi there! One thing about posting haiku: while you may do so, by all means, it's often better to post them in a group or collection if you want thorough ...

Le review: Just for the hell of it, you took out scissors and cut up the sky. (I love this stanza! The first two and a half lines you're like... ...

Le review: To Annalane. When looking in each other's eyes, cliche. very . We forget the world, We set free our hearts, 'we' again? I wouldn't keep saying it. And ...

Thank you everyone!

Hey there m'dear! So, I'll start off by saying I loved this. It was emotional yet distant, and I could picture a waiting room for an office- I pictured a ...

Hi there! So, here's my general impression. This is a decent story. It's very original, and it has a warm, magical undertone to it. However, it's confusing and not particularly ...

... Pot (sorry! Its what came to mind!)

I actually really like this. It's simple, nothing particularly complex or deep, but really well written. It's very entertaining, and I can't wait to read your next instalment! My suggestions ...

Shout out! I'm going to try to do 43 QUALITY reviews. I don't think I'll make that quota, but it's goal to reach for. I'm thinking I'll actually accomplish around ...