ToritheMonster

I love writing stuff for things! I specialise in investigating the history of everyday, commonplace things. I also like to write articles on controversial topics- religion, gay marriage, the death ...

Nice! I like your middle picture the best, it's the most proportionate. The first one has kinda funky legs and the last one has a kinda funky nose and kinda ...

Hi there! I'm not into religious-type poems, but this was well-written, and I actually liked it. Here's the mistakes you should fix in red : SIN In every soul there ...

Hi there! So, this poem doesn't really strike me as anything amazing. Firstly, I can't tell what it's about. Who is 'they'? Is this poem about fighting or something? You ...

Thanks, green teamers. *does secret handshake back*

Hi there! So, I haven't read the other parts of this, but I'll do my best to review. First: I'm a huge comic buff, so I'm a tad confused. Is ...

Thanks! Just so you know, here In the UK we spell a lot of words differently than in America :) colorful>> colourful. favorite>>favourite. Mostly just adding a 'u' or a ...

Hi there! I like this poem, actually. I'm usually not a fan of love poems. Overall, this is cute. I actually think you really captured the feeling of leaving someone ...

Hi there! So, I'm not a huge fanfic person except for the occasional Harry Potter, but I decided to review this. First! Please space out those huge blocks of text. ...

Hi there! So, I haven't read any of your other chapters, so I would typically give you a grammar/spelling review. But this seems pretty well edited to me! I'll give ...

Hi there! So, as someone who recently lost an incredibly special pet, this story really rang true. I know what it's like to have an animal dying at the vet's ...

Hi! So, I'm not big on romance, but this was actually pretty good! You write eloquently, with beautiful imagery and descriptions. This rang with emotion and feeling. It was a ...

Hi there! I liked this poem. It had a sweet simplicity to it- most people write poems about how they ll never find love, how it never exists. I tinge ...

Hi there! So, I'm not going to give this a super nitpicky review, as this doesn't seem like it needs one. You don't have very many basic errors. However, I ...

What is with all these one sentence reviews?! Okay, here's my review: I was there When you won your first gymnastics medal I cheered The loudest I was there When ...