Toripopppy

Freaky story... but pretty epic. I love how sadistic this character is, especially when he laughs at his dead fiance. Just one thing though: I walked slowly to the closet ...

I like the simplicity you used, I think it had a positive effect on showing how someone could feel after a break-up (this is what I asume it to be...). ...

Loved the metaphors you used in the poem, and I like the idea that love is an adventure. :) I can really relate to what you're saying in this, which ...

I really loved this! I fell in love with the main character, Darius, and I'm looking forward to hearing more from him. Not too sure about this part though: I ...