Torigirl15

ahah yes, i was looking for the greek alphabet, but i never really found anything good... Xd ur a lot of help! thank you!! If you ever need any help ...

Although this was very full of emotion and images, none of the images made sense. Why is she taking that many pills? Why is she drinking liquor? Also, what is ...

I liked the fact that the mc was very straight forward, and said exactly what's what. Sometimes writers try to beat around the bush to "show" rather than "tell", but ...

Nice touch with the fog!I agree with the main character, fog holds too many secrets. =) There are only a few things i would change, such as adding a little ...

I really liked this, and yes it would make me read on! it was a little confusing, but I'm sure that's because its the end of a chapter. i didn't ...

Haha I'm glad you liked it. It makes me happy to know that someone besides me likes it too! that would be greatly valued if you were able to find ...

this is one of my favorite parts... =) hope you like it too. Chapter 6-My butt gets kicked, an d not for the first time Smack! Came the sound of ...

A gnarled oak tree stood at the peak of a hill. The tree was over a hundred years old, yet it seemed as fresh and new as the pale daylight ...

I liked the idea of using fading light as a metaphor for a failing relationship, but what confused me was that the guy was so attached to the girl. If ...

Very cool! i liked her eyes the best, that's always the thing i have trouble with whenever I'm in the mood to draw. =]

that source was very helpful thank you! i actually own a book with a lot of those creatures in it, but i was looking for further information, and this was ...

There are a lot of run ons, and this is very confusing... i wasn't sure what was going on a lot of the time...

This story was so sad... but i still enjoyed reading it!

This has some very good allusions, and similies! I like the way you described her as contagious, and how you showed the way her husband was cheating by saying "Things ...

This story was so full of emotion! i loved it! The descriptions were well put, although i was a little confused about why both plants were in the same garden... ...