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Re: Screaming Silent Prayers
this was really good! i enjoyed reading it, and it drew me in from the first line. i liked the description with the 2 barbed wires etc. the caps also ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: A Queen's Kidnapping
it was pretty good, but in my opinion you used the word perhaps a lot. =) the story confused me when it described what the guards were doing to the ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: Past, Present, Future
yeah srry that last kayay123 post was actually me... :D
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Dying Darkness (revised)
yeah i noticed that also... i knew it wasn't very good at the end, but i didn't rlly know how to end it.. now i have a better idea for ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Dying Darkness (revised)
First poem ive actually let ppl read so... hahhahah The darkness seeps closer, reaching, for it knows her, she's familiar with its charms, falling quickly back into its arms. She's ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Past, Present, Future
Innocence-Tori i could try to make our lives sound interesting, but in a way that would be lying. People wouldn't believe this truth that im telling and so that's the ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Keeper: [2] *edited*
WONDERFUL! great way to keep me hooked my adding suspense at the end!!!! now i really cant wait to read the next ones
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Keeper: [1] *edited*
Great beginning, it hooked me immediatly but was a bit slow, much better as the story went further on however and i cant wait to read the rest
Jan 30, 2010