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  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Other Re: Ecliptic: Episode One - Streetlight [WIP]

    Thank you so much for the nitpicks, they go a long way. I'll be sure to tweak upon that. My issue as you stated was mainly keeping a sentence going ...

    Jun 6, 2018
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Other Re: Ecliptic: Episode One - Streetlight [WIP]

    I was actually going to read the "Conics Unfortunately" series on here and review it when I was finished. That'll be a while, but it seems like a hell of ...

    Jun 6, 2018
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Other Re: Ecliptic: Episode One - Streetlight [WIP]

    Wow. Thank you so much, this was exactly the kind of feedback I wanted. I love the concept of threading, I've never really thought about it. You have really helped ...

    Jun 5, 2018


But sometimes a hypocrite is nothing more than a person who is in the process of changing.
— Dalinar (Oathbringer by Brandon Sanderson)