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Re: The Duty Chapter 2 {Being Edited}
This second chapter of your story was very good, although it was rather short. I found only one mistake and it is right here: Merlyn can read; the only other ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1, The Duty {Being Edited}
First off, I just wanted to say that this is my first review, so I'm sorry if it does not help you in any way. This story is great and ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: The Movie for Twilight by Stephenie Meyer
That was really funny! Even though I am a fan of the books, I was cracking up almost the whole time I was reading this.
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Hello!
Hello Young Writers! I am Toomak, also known as OBatR.
Jul 1, 2008