Tomothy_Mayhem

First, beyong anything, I hesitated to start reading because of the format. Some better paragraph spacing would be much better, easier to read especially. "I swam around the lake like ...

I quite like this one. Very good explanation of a battlefield, I'm not one to be giving grammatical advise but I do want to here more of Archion and the ...

Thanks for that, I've just gone through the copy on my computer and have fixed the problems you specified. Although, I only changed the coma with a period in the ...