Tomas

I wrote these for fun as an addition or following to "love the scenario" one of my previous posts in the Other Poetry forum. :D :lol: # 1 "The others" ...

The crime of my offering; still in the world. I'm wheeling, wheeling away. While the gun I hold builds its relationship with love inside the barrel. Why don't aim!?! You ...

I like it

I'm speechless! this is great velvet...

I just re-read and realized you said this was an "Old Poem". So I guess that can justify a lot of things. The question becomes how old ? If you ...

Hi, I happen to like religious topics; I find it quite interesting. There is a lot going on in this poem. I dont think I could ever put a poem ...

Thanks Sky, and everyone else for the compliments! It was definatly at the time, a very emotional and personal poem for me.

Yeah I would have to say I like the ideas... and the writing that you put into it. I am just sure exactly what it is suppose to mean i.e. ...

Hey Amie, Weird, for some reason the poems format is scattered all over the place but when I hit reply the correct format you orginally put it in, shows at ...

Hey Sarah, I like this.. at first I was a bit hesitant because of the line "A bond as one". I don't find those emotions bond, merely they interact but ...

Boston, Not bad... I always like reading poetry that is open and conceptual and something that is usually never talked about or expressed. My favorite line is "Secret smiles and ...

I definitely appreciate the language you present, and the honesty that comes forth. Your effort is limitless. We talked, we drank, we walked, we were the jazz. I like the ...

Hey Bud... Here goes your first work reviewed; don't worry I won't pick it apart to much. :) I have a really hard time criticizing art, even though I know ...

Haha! :) I have class so you're on your own. I'm happy you enjoy it.... truly And I need to catch up on my reviews so maybe I'll hit up ...

Yes, thats a better way of saying it Velvet! :) Thank you.