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Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
yeah im back now, I have had some experiences recently that have kind of changed my outlook on things and I have disbanded my Alcorus story and will be brewing ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Sorry dad
now I like this poem as I have had troubles with my dad in the past and he pile son an awful lot of pressure on me to do well ...
Dec 19, 2008 -
Re: Alcorus Chapter One
Thankyou for the feedback guys. I agree that perspective is a thing I need to work on and my sentence structure was not amazing in this piece so thankyou very ...
Dec 19, 2008 -
Re: Blue Ice fire
I thought this was really nice, there were a few typo's but they were just simple typing mistakes and am not going to criticize for that. I like the way ...
Dec 19, 2008 -
Re: Alcorus Chapter One
Sorry for the inconvenience of the length of my piece however I wanted to post the First Chapter in its entirety. This is the opening Chapter from a novel I ...
Dec 12, 2008 -
Re: 1500 Points Up for Grabs
Is anything in this world more underrated than an ice cream cone it holds in place the most aweosme treat and when we get through that we just drone without ...
Dec 12, 2008 -
Re: YWS Big Birthday Contest: First Place
congratulations do these forums do competitions like this often?
Dec 11, 2008 -
Re: The Timekeeper - Prologue
yeah I loved this story, it has great potential and it already sinks in a storyline that will make me want to read it through till the end. The only ...
Dec 11, 2008 -
Re: Time - Does it Exist?
yeah its not like a proper story its just something I did at GCSE and decided to post here :)
Dec 11, 2008 -
Re: By Sun, By Moon - Prologue
I met his stare, hating and defying his silent condescension. But, after a long moment, I was the one to drop my gaze. is it correct to start a sentence ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Time - Does it Exist?
What is time? Is it real? Can it be seen? Can it be felt? Can it be explained? Does it even exist? If I was in the United Kingdom and ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Time
I hope you don't mind but this reminded me of a piece I wrote in my Religious Studies GCSE class which I will publish shortly. I think time is an ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Howdy
Thankyou all for the great reception and welcome. I have read the rules and thankyou for making me feel welcomed here after just one post I will try my best ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Forked (1)
I thought the MC was very interesting and a good character to base the story around. His sense of humour and his lack of caring what other people thought brought ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: The Journal of a Spartan (edited)
He had been shot in the side, but with a glancing blow. He would make it. His squad fell in behind him. I had relaxed my guard only to hear ...
Dec 10, 2008
