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Count me out of future rounds.

I've added some changes here and there, but I'm not all done yet. Still, you are very welcome to give critique. I want to thank Andimlovegalore (again) for the review, ...

Okay Zoorah. As promised I have read the part that I didn't read last time, and also the newly added chapter. I have added comments and suggestions throughout the story, ...

As you said yourself, this is REALLY short, but I kinda like the idea of writing such short stories (it adds a challenge). As there isn't much text, I don't ...

I'm almost sad that it's so short :P I'll look forward to reading the rest. You use details brilliantly, and I enjoy reading your works. Now for the not-so-fun part: ...

Okay Natalie, here we go. You have some amazing details along the way, and quite a varied use of words. I found some mistakes along the way, which I added ...

I have yet to read the whole thing, but already I see some things that ought to be corrected. In general you put commas to good use, but after a ...

W - William Shakespeare (okay, not very original)

Overall a nice story with a good flow, and few grammatical errors. I know this is just the first chapter of a possibly quite long story, but I would still ...

I spontaneously wrote this story some time ago. Please review/critique :P DRAGON The air in his lungs was forced out as the dragon effortlessly pinned him to the ground. The ...

Because his monster entered a "Dr. Frankenstein Look-Alike Contest" and won. Why are some people afraid of clowns?

This sounds like fun, and I would like to try it out :D I'll PM my e-mail

Well, thank you for the compliment, but is there by any chance anything else you, or someone else might want to add to that? :P

What I'm working on at the moment is sort of a collection of short stories, all revolving around the same person (her life/history) I was inspired to do this because ...

I agree with Anzius! Terry Pratchett is a genious, and worth every minute spent reading one of his books. 13½ lives of Captain Bluebear is also a hillarious book that ...