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Re: Rise of the Flames (prologue)
I've read over it again, and it's way better than before :) I couldn't really spot any obvious mistakes, but there's some sentences I think you could make better so ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: Rise of the Flames (prologue)
Prologue “Holy… Mother of God…” I couldn’t help it, my legs were frozen to the spot. It’s not like any sane person anywhere else on Earth wouldn’t have been petrified ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: Bloodlines #1: Chapter 1
I shot up in bed, screaming, sweat dripping down my forehead and into my eyes. “Oh my god , " I cried out as I gasped for air, trying really ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: Right In The Face
Hey, I'll review! :) I'm new myself, so it'll probably be useless but I hope I help a little :) and if anything I say is wrong, ignore me XD ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Dr. Dolittle Week.
Submission into "The big random story theme contest." My generated theme was: Your story is about an actor in a mental insitution forgetting people's names. Frank remembered the rules. Rule ...
Jun 29, 2011