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  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Nameless Bit of Poetry

    Thanks Firewriter! I usually do my best work late at night :) and yes, I've been told I am a strange person. It suits me though. I love the name ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Nameless Bit of Poetry

    Hey guys! Thanks for the reviews :) Audrey- In the piece, I was alliterating the crow to somebody I know. He's like I described the crow to be-- misunderstood and ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Cuts.

    You get it. I don't know it this has any personal experience tied to it, and if it doesn't, then I'm truly impressed. I couldn't wait to read the next ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Kisses of the Night

    Hey there- This is pretty compelling and I want to read more. I feel a bit in the dark, but maybe that's your intention. I really hope you continue on ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Nameless Bit of Poetry

    Wrote this around 2am sometime last week. It has no name yet, so I need some suggestions! Also, it's a rough draft, so please feel free to suggest writing ideas, ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Thought

    This is beautiful in and of itself. It needs no other words of accolade, praise, or applause to convince the reader of its beauty. I read it four times before ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Did you laugh?

    This was super cute and invoked a lovely feeling of childhood naivete while at the same time, I feel as though the author is wanting the reader to see something ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Paradise Lost

    Hello, I like this a lot. Not because it's happy, but because it's thought-provoking. I was a little bit confused at some points and I had to read through the ...

    Sep 26, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Run Away With Me

    Hey there! Such a sweet poem. I loved the last stanza, it really brought the poem together as a whole. It was a good summation of the previous stanzas, and ...

    Sep 26, 2011
  • Other Re: A Musical Storm

    Hey guys! Thanks for the reviews. I will go change those grammar mistakes as soon as I get back to my house and can fix them on a real computer ...

    Sep 22, 2011
  • Other Re: A Musical Storm

    Crash. Rain throws itself against my window, as though trying to out-do the howling of the wind. The trees groan in protest as the churning sky whips them to and ...

    Sep 22, 2011
  • Other Re: There's a hole in my bucket

    I like the piece as a whole, there were a few grammar mistakes though. I'm sure you can find those on your own, though ;). I agree with BlueAfrica on ...

    Sep 22, 2011
  • Other Re: If you're talking to the moon

    I love to read a post that makes me think. You have definitely made me think with this one. Wow, just brilliant. I can't applaud you enough. Your style and ...

    Sep 2, 2011
  • Other Re: An experiment in indirect speech.

    Wow, this was very nicely written. Hard hitting and to the point. I love the tone and the rhythm. The way you phrased things was unique, and thus very captivating ...

    Sep 2, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Death in a paper roll.

    Hey- Great work here. Only saw a few grammatical mistakes, but it was so enveloping overall. I love the tension between the girl and the writer. It was a nice ...

    Aug 31, 2011


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