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  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Nameless Bit of Poetry

    Thanks Firewriter! I usually do my best work late at night :) and yes, I've been told I am a strange person. It suits me though. I love the name ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Nameless Bit of Poetry

    Hey guys! Thanks for the reviews :) Audrey- In the piece, I was alliterating the crow to somebody I know. He's like I described the crow to be-- misunderstood and ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Cuts.

    You get it. I don't know it this has any personal experience tied to it, and if it doesn't, then I'm truly impressed. I couldn't wait to read the next ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Kisses of the Night

    Hey there- This is pretty compelling and I want to read more. I feel a bit in the dark, but maybe that's your intention. I really hope you continue on ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Nameless Bit of Poetry

    Wrote this around 2am sometime last week. It has no name yet, so I need some suggestions! Also, it's a rough draft, so please feel free to suggest writing ideas, ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Thought

    This is beautiful in and of itself. It needs no other words of accolade, praise, or applause to convince the reader of its beauty. I read it four times before ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Did you laugh?

    This was super cute and invoked a lovely feeling of childhood naivete while at the same time, I feel as though the author is wanting the reader to see something ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Paradise Lost

    Hello, I like this a lot. Not because it's happy, but because it's thought-provoking. I was a little bit confused at some points and I had to read through the ...

    Sep 26, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Run Away With Me

    Hey there! Such a sweet poem. I loved the last stanza, it really brought the poem together as a whole. It was a good summation of the previous stanzas, and ...

    Sep 26, 2011
  • Other Re: A Musical Storm

    Hey guys! Thanks for the reviews. I will go change those grammar mistakes as soon as I get back to my house and can fix them on a real computer ...

    Sep 22, 2011
  • Other Re: A Musical Storm

    Crash. Rain throws itself against my window, as though trying to out-do the howling of the wind. The trees groan in protest as the churning sky whips them to and ...

    Sep 22, 2011
  • Other Re: There's a hole in my bucket

    I like the piece as a whole, there were a few grammar mistakes though. I'm sure you can find those on your own, though ;). I agree with BlueAfrica on ...

    Sep 22, 2011
  • Other Re: If you're talking to the moon

    I love to read a post that makes me think. You have definitely made me think with this one. Wow, just brilliant. I can't applaud you enough. Your style and ...

    Sep 2, 2011
  • Other Re: An experiment in indirect speech.

    Wow, this was very nicely written. Hard hitting and to the point. I love the tone and the rhythm. The way you phrased things was unique, and thus very captivating ...

    Sep 2, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Death in a paper roll.

    Hey- Great work here. Only saw a few grammatical mistakes, but it was so enveloping overall. I love the tension between the girl and the writer. It was a nice ...

    Aug 31, 2011


Russets and tangerine shades of old gold flushing the very outside edge of the senses ... deep shining ochres, burnt umber and parchments of baked earth—reflecting on itself and through itself, filtering the light.
— Guildenstern (Rosencrantz & Guildenstern Are Dead by Tom Stoppard)