TinyDancer

Creative!! Nice flow and rhythm, unique subject, and witty take. Great job. Not much else to say! I love it :) ~Jess

I wrote this for someone close to me who discovered that her man was a liar and was cheating with one of her closest friends. The song itself has a ...

Hey everybody, thanks so much for your reviews! They mean so much to me :) ~Jess

Awww I loved this! :) it was so sweet and beautiful and had such a lovely flow! I'm still no expert at poetry, but I really got into this piece. ...

In the end, we're all the same Ashes to ashes, dust to dust All identities will rust Graves will fall unnamed In the end, you cannot tell After all, we'll ...

Yay! Another piece of poetry from Zombie :) You made my day better by posting!! hehe ok, now for the review: I loved LOVED LOVED the first and second stanzas, ...

AMEN SISTAH hehe ;) I can't really give a whole lot of commentary here because it wasn't exactly a whole piece, but way to get it out :) You could ...

Hmmm.... I didn't quite understand a few parts of it, but with good writers come readers like I who can't fully understand the mastermind's intent. I wanted to find it ...

Hey there, me again! Once again, you portray a lovely dark voice in this piece. I love the title as well. It's an attention grabber and that is very important! ...

Aw this was just as good as the other two! It was sad having to go through the pain with Christian of your love not being able to remember you. ...

This is lovely! Not much to say except that I only noticed a few grammatical and verb tense errors, but other than that, it was phenomenal. The imagery you used ...

Hey there-- I thought this was adorable and beautiful and heartbreaking. I loved the setting and although I haven't read any other parts of your novel, I think I just ...

Hey :) It looks like you have a great beginning to a story here. You should definitely expand this! Although I loved the ideas and scenes in the story, I ...

Hi :) I thought this piece was perfectly dark and had that beautiful mournful tone all the way through. You are a talented poet and I can tell that you ...

This is a variation of my poem "A Nameless Bit of Poetry". Thanks, PollarBear for the idea! On whispered breeze there flies a crow, Not knowing what he seeks Aimless ...