TinyDancer

Hey there, here to return the favor for your review of Inferno. This piece was beautifully written. You had nice flow and great descrptions. I agree with TheAmazon that you ...

Hello :) Just here to return the favor for the review you gave me on Inferno. I was totally lost throughout the whole thing, but I could really see the ...

Hey there, I've come to return the favor for your review on Inferno. I loved this piece! It was very informative and descriptive, but not suffocatingly so. I like to ...

Hello, I've come to return the favor for your review on my piece, Somewhere Brighter. I really liked this! I am a huge Alice in Wonderland fan, and you totally ...

Hey there, just here to return the favor for your review on my piece, Somewhere Brighter. This is a bit out of my area of expertise, but I will try ...

Hey there, just returning a favor for your review on my piece. Anyway... First of all, I absolutely love this piece. It almost made me cry because it is sooooo ...

Oh, and as for a title, here are some suggestions: Why I Never Fell in Love with Snow White She Named Me Grumpy Better to Lose than to Love The ...

I thought this was a cute and funny spin on the original tale. I also like how it's told from Grumpy's perspective. I was a little bit on the fence ...

Ok, so this is something different than what I usually do. It's for a contest, and I need to describe many dreams that I've had while attempting to tie them ...

I have goosebumps! This is fantastic. A very fitting title as well. The person above me already brought about the run-on errors and the whole Ralph inconsistency, but other than ...

Hey there everybody-- Just a quick reply to all of you since you all seem to be saying the same thing :) I must defend my case in the lack ...

Ribbons of ruby red and golden yellow snaked through the boiling air. Everything was gone except the skeleton of a house that had stood there just hours before. Jack had ...

Ribbons of ruby red and golden yellow snaked through the boiling air. Everything was gone except the skeleton of a house that had stood there just hours before. Jack had ...

Make this a novel!! Or at least longer. I really liked it! I didn't feel rushed at all, but you definitely could've expanded it a little...or a lot ;) Anyway, ...

Beautiful. I really loved the way you played the words here. You made them work for you very nicely. I was a bit lost at times, but when I read ...