TinyDancer

She spins carefree Through wildflowers, Her arms outstretched Fairytales sketched Softly through the hours. A baby girl Of scarcely four With windswept hair Her skin so fair Easy to adore. ...

Hey there, just returning the favor for your review on my piece. I really liked this :) It perfectly captured the emotion a girl feels when her man fails to ...

I've been writing a lot of lyrics lately, and this particular song is about someone I used to know, but people change with the seasons, and all you can do ...

Hey there, just returning the favor for your review on my piece, Wonderful Tonight. I was a bit confused in the beginning of this, but by the end, I felt ...

Hmmmm...I'm not going to lie. I could have predicted every single event in this story so far. It's very cliche', and hence, slightly boring. If you write a second chapter, ...

Hey there, just returning the favor for your review on Blue As The Sea. I liked this piece. I'm not a poetry expert, but it was really good! I was ...

Hey there: I really liked this. I mean, really really liked it. But, there were some parts where I think you over-did some things. For example, you would occasionally add ...

Notes spilled softly from your guitar as we sat by the fireplace. The occasional pop of slowly burning wood added to the romantic essence of the music. I recognized the ...

Hello friend :) I love, LOVE, LOVEEEEE this song. And this poem is so amazing. I had goosebumps the whole time! Great job, you really captured the entire scene I ...

Read the Prologue fisrt: ~Inferno~ Chapter One Sam gazed out Jack’s third story hospital room window. It had been three weeks since the fire and Jack was still having trouble ...

I've read better things by you, but this was nice too! I was kind of lost in some parts, but altogether, good work. Just brush it up a bit, polish ...

Hello there, just returning the favor or the review on my piece, The Baldwin on Lexington Road. Anyway... This was really cute and it made me laugh. Which is really ...

Another great work! I just love reading the Italian! There were a few small grammar errors in the English version, but that comes when writing in a language that's not ...

Hey there :) This piece was beautiful! I know a little Latin, so I could kind of pick up the Italian version, and might I say, Italian is a much ...

This is beautiful, and so true! Lovely imagery and tone. There were a few spots where I didn't feel the rhythm of the poem, but then you got back to ...