TinyDancer

Wow, this is great! You've got such an inspiring way with words, and I love the way you switch from literal dancing to the figurative dancing of your pen. Its ...

ItIsLove- Thanks for the review and pointers. I will add some breaks in a minute. When I wrote it, I wrote it as one thought but you are definitely right ...

Thanks guys! Kagi- I was on the fence about the line you quoted first. It was personal for me but I didn't think people would get it. I thought they'd ...

So vividly, I still remember the scent of rain on your jacket, the shiver I got when your ear brushed across my hair. I felt your heart, Your lungs, Your ...

Hey there- Me again :). Can I just say, I can't get enough of your writing? Anyway, as usual, great form and it had a wonderful flow to it too. ...

Wow, great volatile emotion here- I do agree with whoever it was up there that said it needed more sensory elements. I didn't feel locked out necessarily, just left in ...

Ha! This is great! I was all ready to be sad about a breakup then I kept reading and realized it was about a Twizzler. That's fantastic- very original and ...

Hey there- I really liked this piece because of the unique view you gave of the breakup. The flow could use some more work, but you've got something good here! ...

Hey there! Thanks for the review. The title has to do with our wish to keep our memories frozen. It fails though, as they're constantly moving and changing. I just ...

Ever wish you could make time stand still? The scene before you captured; locked away in your memory forever, ready to be recalled at a moment's notice. How often we ...

Wow! Great piece. I loved the tone. You really captured the feeling of a thunderstorm. Storms are one of my favorite things to write about for this reason- they are ...

Such a beautiful picture, and familiar too. Even if someone has never been in that specific scenario, they could feel as though they have. I love the detail and I ...

I really wish I could hear how the melody goes. I love the imagery and the metaphorical touches. You're a great songwriter! Keep up the good work.

I'm not really a cat person, but I really liked your piece. It was interesting to take a look into the mind of an animal. I always love that. I ...

What is it about the rain that brings calm,  Yet urgency?  Hope,  Yet sadness?  Peace,  Yet disturbance?  Why do the same drops that persuade you to dance so energetically under ...