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Re: Alfred Symon's Critic Clinic: Bringing Smiles since the 60's
Hey there :D Could you please review these lyrics? It's been up for several days and I was hoping to get some feedback on it since it's different than anything ...
Mar 28, 2012 -
Re: Posssibilities...Or Experiments, Perhaps.
Hello friends :) I have had a stroke of creativity, and started a novel again. The last one fell through my fingers, so I'm hoping this one will be better. ...
Jan 16, 2012 -
Re: My Thoughts
This was goreous, my friend :) You have a gift. And if this is what happens WITH writer's block, I really want to know how you write without it haha! ...
Jan 8, 2012 -
Re: Request away!
Hello there :) Could you review this? It's only relatively short. I don't know what to call it, so I stuck it in Other. Anyway, if you get a chance: ...
Jan 7, 2012 -
Re: The New Yws
Eh, I have my doubts right now, but I think it will be better than ever when everything is done. Regarding your most recent comment, I wonder why you gave ...
Jan 6, 2012 -
Re: The Golden Guitar Pick
The amp made a low fizzling noise as he plugged in his Les Paul. He took careful measures to wrap the cord through his strap before slipping the guitar over ...
Jan 6, 2012 -
Re: Trixie
Ah! I can't find the "like" button. Usually, when I don't have any constructive criticism, I will like something and leave it there. That's what I was going to do ...
Jan 5, 2012 -
Re: Welcome to Apollo! Nothing works...
Good work so far :) I had a bunch of notifications that I didn't have a chance to read before the craziness happened, and it's making me insane not knowing ...
Dec 25, 2011 -
Re: Winter's love.
Oh my gosh, this was so incredibly gorgeous. This should be published :) I loved the whole concept of the bold at the beginning of the lines that told a ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: It's Not His Kiss [Edited]
This was incredibly sweet and I really loved the little details you so beautifully described. You really gave me the warm-and-fuzzies with this one xD I only have one critique ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Alone in my head
Hey there, just here to return the favor for your review on Fairytales. This was a good way, don't worry :) You have a nice rhythm established by the middle ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: A Better Tomorrow
Hey there, just returning the favor for your review of Fairytales. You have some good ideas here. Personally, I think they could be presented in a more organized, better flowing ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: lost once again
Hey there, just returning the favor for your review on my piece. I couldn't find any large-scale errors here, and I really enjoyed the subject. You played the stanzas well ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: College Essay {help help please}
Ok, here we go. I am returning the favor for your review on Sleepless, and I will try to be thorough with this since it's for college. We were greeted ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Kissing Alfredo
Oh my goodness. You are so talented. This is so sweet and lovely and perfect ;) I really think you should expand this as you were contemplating doing in the ...
Dec 14, 2011
