TinkerTwaggy

Ah, I see. may or may not, depends on the person I guess. Fingers crossed! But it should definitely disappear next chapter.

Welcome back then :D Ok then! let's see what you can ad in that revie of yours! and I still don't mind typos! Yup, that was the gambit. Manage to ...

Hello again, Masq! Thembeing almost too similar is actually the point. I wished for the twins (when they read their parts) to feel like they lived the same thing, and ...

Hello there, Trisarah, and thanks a ton for the review! Pff. Don't fret about it. I have issues with typos as well, as you've seen in this text XD Y-yeah... ...

Hey there Masq! Thanks a ton for the review :) Lemme have the pleasure to answer to it. It is intentional, yes. I'm kind experimenting with the fairy tale vibe, ...

That is pretty much the idea, yes. Thanks, glad you liked it! The main reason why I added little describing for this one is because it features "Geno", a character ...

The mistakes have normally been fixed! THanks again for pointing those out.

Hi, and thanks a ton for the review! ...Huh. And there I thought the "there" at the beginning wasn't necessary. Bummer. Ah, the semicolon is not something I entirely master ...

Of course I did! I wasn't going to miss an opportunity to discover a new world :3 *giggles at fuzzie* ah... that is interesting. Aww, the I'll have to wait ...

@fictional It's a good thing to ask yourself questions^^ Hm, that's kind of the idea I had in mind, but only AFTER writing this line. Thoughtful interpretation there. That's really ...

Hi UshertheThird! Glad you took some of your time to review my work :) I am glad you enjoyed it, from the narration to voice and description. Makes me proud: ...

Yeah sorry for this, I REALLY wanted to throw this punchline in the story. Glad it makes more sense to you now :) Ok then! I'll still remember that though, ...

Hi Kekai! Glad you took some of your time to review my work :) Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! That's weird, none of the previous reviewers comment about it. ...

Oh, you decided to review this one as well! Neat^^ Yes, I thought humour would add to the devilish side of the story. "I'm evil and I enjoy it" style. ...

Thought-provoking, huh? How so? The only aim I hwas was to portray a despicable character in action. Yes, I do need to work on other senses, not nly eyes. I'll ...