Tinalove

thx guys, appreciate all the help:)

You lied. Said we’d get though anything You abandoned me Left me feeling so empty Relationships involve disagreements And hardships will come too You didn’t love me Because you didn’t ...

Simplicity at its finest! Simple poetry with heavy meaning is my favorite kind. Your words rhyme nicely and the flow is nice. Keep up the good writing babe:)

I think your poem here is very well written. For this being an early work as you dont write poetry, Id say you did acceptionally well. I dont think you ...

I love the passion you have here but there are some things I would change. Since you started off in a four stanza form and continued it, you should stick ...

very good writing, the words you chose were perfect to express what youre feeling. I sympathize with you as you clearly write your heart out here.

wonderful poem, good flow, love your diversity of words. great job hun, keep it up!

I like your choice of words. You've got a steady rhythm but your stanzas tend do go out longer than they should. Try to match your stanzas more, it will ...

I personally think that this poem is beautiful. I find no faults in this. Poems dont necessarily have to rhyme to be considered poetry and ending stanzas with the same ...

The bus ride with you To me felt like years We saw half the country With no cares or fears You held me so tight Let me sleep in your ...