Tina579

The fighting scene is very descriptive and well animated. I feel there should have been a little of a story between the two characters to give the ending a better ...

It is exactly what you said about being sorrowful and hopeless, however I am currently working on the continuation of the story so that's why its short. I would like ...

I am currently working on the continuation of this story, so for those of you who would love to read more on the story... it will be a wait because ...

I appreciate and love everyone's comments and critiques. To be very honest I wasn't sure if I should continue on further with this character and create a story revolving around ...

I honestly don't understand what you mean by "lengthen"?