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Re: Gladys and Maddie
"It was a slow night at the MGM casino in Las Vegas when arguably the two most interesting patrons of the night walked in. Although their minds worked in similar ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: Riversong: Path to Paradise (Prologue and Chapter 1)
I don't have anything negative to say about this. I would very much like to read the rest of it though. Excellent! =]
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: Denial
What do you do when you've failed yourself? This is a difficult question; people don't want to think about this question. Everyone's already got everyone else to please. Do you ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: How to Sell Things at a Yard Sale
This is excellent. First of all, I like that you sort of transcribed your universe into this poem, and very vivdly at that. The first five or so stanzas are ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: Speculation: F58
Hey Faia. :) I liked it quite a bit. Your opening paragraph is beautifully written; you do a great job conveying the sensation of drowning, and from the first sentence, ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: Why hello
My name is Timothy. I'm a new-ish fiction writer hoping to find some honest feedback from my peers.
Aug 2, 2009
