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Re: An Introduction
Ok. I just wanted to say that it was the best review I think I have ever had. :P Also, all of those brackets are really confusing!! xD I will ...
Dec 8, 2013 -
Re: The Battle of Thermopylae, as told by Lycrus
Thanks!
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: An Introduction
Thanks!
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: The Battle of Thermopylae, as told by Lycrus
I looked for the part where he questioned it and I couldn't find it. Could you point it out so I can fix it? The battle of marathon was where ...
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: An Introduction
I edited it a bit. I thought I would look better in the present tense rather than past and I fixed the spots you mentioned. See anything else?
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: An Introduction
I should have spent more time on it, and now I know what to focus on. Thanks for the review!
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: An Introduction
You point out a lot of its weaknesses. Thank you! I will work on it.
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: An Introduction
And yes, I shall continue it. Maybe. If I feel like it. Bwahahahaha!!
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: An Introduction
Thank you!
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: An Introduction
I am actually half-way finished with it and I wanted an intro. They are men, but they are also dragon. It is confusing until you read the book. Thank you ...
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: An Introduction
thanks for the review!!
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: An Introduction
thanks for the review!!
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: Do you know that feeling?
No problem!
Dec 5, 2013 -
Re: The Battle of Thermopylae, as told by Lycrus
Whoa. A few too many responses. I have no idea how that happened. xD
Dec 5, 2013 -
Re: The Battle of Thermopylae, as told by Lycrus
Thanks for the review! I did a lot of research on it, but obviously my character was dreamed up. I found his name in a Greek book and liked it. ...
Dec 5, 2013