TimmyJake

I mean that you -- the WRITER -- may talk differently from the person who is trying to read your writing -- the READER -- which may prevent your story ...

Oh no, I totally understand we accent words when we talk. I was just saying that not everyone in the world talks like you do or accents the same words ...

Like, someone might think "Where did you get that !?" is more bent toward anger but " Where did you get that?" is more bent toward curiosity, but another person ...

Agree with you 100% on the single exclamation points, @temporarilyshane. I have fixed them... And italics? Oh, yes! If there is anything I over use, its italics. They can be ...

I have recently been working on emotion through dialogue, expressing what my character feels through what he says as much as he thinks... This is my take on dialogue... I ...

Life is like a really long movie. You can’t watch it forever or you’ll burn yourself out. Get some sleep and then maybe you’ll feel like finishing it. -Someone in ...

Awww... thank you so much! You guys rock. :D

Thank you so much! Everything you stated is true to me... I will work on what you said and thank you for all of your help! :D I will have ...

Thanks for the awesome advice! I confess that I am not a big reader, so I should start picking up more books than just those on YWS! I have also ...

Thank you so much! That is very helpful. I will just continue writing and push through this hard period. :D

Hey everybody! I have been writing a novel for two and a half years, and my version I am working on now is up to 430 pages, which is a ...

Absolutely... This is an awesome guide for it! Thanks, Tenyo! Some reviews I leave seem a little negative to me... and I don't want that! After all, this site is ...

I think that's it! I'll try it now! I think I am doing it wrong. There is the link to my review where I attempted to do the quote. Maybe ...

I am trying to clean up my reviews by using the quotes... Can anyone help me with that? Thanks!! :D

Ok. So what did you need help with exactly? You have an entire story line written out! Just get started! It sounds like it will be very moving and emotional, ...