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TimmyJake

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  • Writing Tips Re: Suggestions?

    YES. I loved the one about the favorite parent! I think that, while it does need some editing and a possible rewrite to bring it up to competition standards, it's ...

    Mar 1, 2016
  • Writing Tips Re: Stop the constant He/She said!

    What @Meandbooks said. ^^ It's basically everything I'd want to say. Said is like a period: invisible, and works every time. That being said, a bit of diversity helps convey ...

    Jan 20, 2016
  • Writers Corner Re: Too dark for yws?

    Anything and everything is perfect for YWS! There are readers for every genre and all kinds of writing. So write it, post it with the correct ratings, and you're set! ...

    Nov 28, 2015
  • Will Review For Food Re: Review Trading Center

    Let's get this going again! I don't have a piece to be reviewed as it's been a while since I've posted something, but as a random work... Lol To get ...

    Nov 19, 2015
  • YWS Re: "Good For Your Age" is Not a Compliment

    Hm, I think it's something you get when you're younger, especially when in your very early teens. For me, I didn't get that because I only started showing my work ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Writing Tips Re: How should I break up my lines?

    I'll give you a quick review on the poem and address the stanza issue. c:

    Apr 19, 2015
  • Grammar & Research Re: British and American Spellings: The Differences

    I use British spelling all the time, even though I'm an American. But it's quite by accident, and I don't realize it most of the time. I talk to way ...

    Apr 7, 2015
  • Research Re: Listening to music that is a differen language when writing?

    With me and my writing, it depends. On one book, I listen to classical music or soundtracks and it really helps me. On another book, music with lyrics and a ...

    Apr 3, 2015
  • YWS Re: Tough Love or Just Being Mean?

    Wonderful article, Sparkles. If we're going to tear someone's work apart, it's our job as a reviewer to show them how to piece it back together. Sometimes we all need ...

    Mar 15, 2015
  • Writers Corner Re: Medieval Times Research Help

    While I don't know anything about 12th century England, I wrote a short story on England in the 14th century. I would say what you need to do is read, ...

    Jan 19, 2015
  • Research Re: Reviewing Poetry Tips

    Heyyyyy, everybody! So I have been trying to review poetry more often lately, mostly just because I think reviewing novel chapters have been running me dry (not because of the ...

    Nov 20, 2014
  • Writers Corner Re: The Timmy's Pre-writing Journal

    My challenge 9 Q&A session, ordered by Miss Bossy (aka @Deanie). She keeps nudging me to do this stuff, and good thing, too. Otherwise I would be woefully more behind ...

    Oct 4, 2014
  • Writers Corner Re: The Timmy's Pre-writing Journal

    My avatar is just in stunned silence. He may explain sometime @Deanie First day of doing NaNo (and that is assuming I have started on the right month), and I ...

    Oct 2, 2014
  • Writers Corner Re: The Timmy's Pre-writing Journal

    So I have been forced advised to write Affinity - a project already in the works, only about 10,000 words into it - for NaNo. It's a science-fiction story I ...

    Oct 1, 2014
  • Writers Corner Re: Aley's Prewriting Journal

    I only have one thing to say about your book so far: so organized, so planned. I am jealous. Everything looks like you have it all in order, and have ...

    Sep 26, 2014


Isn't it funny how day by day nothing changes but when you look back, everything's different?
— C.S. Lewis