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Tim-the-Jesus-Freak

  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The New World

    Interesting structure. Very logical, methodical, perhaps too repetitive, not enough variation in paragraph length? I like the tone created, it’s very continuous with little breach of the fictional d

    Mar 21, 2008


I was flummoxed by fractious Franny's decision to abrogate analgesics for the moribund victims of the recent conflagration. Of course, to display histrionics was discretionary, but I did so anyways, implicating a friend in my drama to make the effect cumulative. I think a misanthrope would have a prosaic appellation, perhaps one related to autonomy and the rejection of anthropocentrism. I think they wouldn't think much of the prominence of watching the coagulation of tea to prognosticate future malevolent events, not even if those events were related to jurisprudence.
— Spearmint