TildenJay

Thank you :) I'm working on a series of short stories, and I've been considering writing an episode with the Smiling Man as a villain. Of course a longer story ...

Thank you very much!

This is good, I like the imagery. The blatant rhyming is a little distracting, which might help if you did an a-b-a-b rhyme scheme instead of a-a-b-b, like that. Your ...