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Re: Chapter 5 part 2 of 2
Ok, final chapter of this for today. More tmr, I hope. The Green Room does wait… I stumbled over “During this incident” because idk what incident Legion means. A reminder ...
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Re: Chapter 5 Upgrades part 1 of 2
Have I mentioned that the sorting functions on YWS are a mess. Like, even if you look at the sci-fi stories and go alllll the way back to nov 23, ...
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Re: Chapter 4 Crash
Alrighty, new day, new chapter and enough Green Room done to ease the conscience. Let’s go! Hui, I didn’t expect them to use laughing gas. I remember I got the ...
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Re: It's a Boring World [Ch. I, Nine]
So. I read it. First sentence is nice. Pls do better paragraphing in this one: “Ah shit, here we go again – “ It hard to read ☹ You didn’t ...
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Re: Carrieta -- Author's Note
Well fellow Green Room apprentice. I have come for your work.... And immediately I'm kinda sad because there's not more to go over. You didn't give any indication on what ...
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Re: my arms
Hello and good day to you! What an evocative poem. I like the way you structured it. That the // clearly separate the lines but it still feels like a ...
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Re: Lenore falls to the grave
I like the idea of a fanfic abt a poem. So let’s go. Hm my first thought is that this seems a recurring thing now. I remember Perdita. I remember ...
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Re: To Paxaria: part 9.1
Alrighty, look what I found. Another part of this in the Green Room so bear with me 😊 I like that they have to get rid of the horse :3 ...
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Re: Feelings -- Who cares?
Oh I am intrigued by this: “a dark secret, buried so deep that even time gave up on it.” And also this: “Somewhere along the way, I forgot how to ...
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Re: Chapter 3 Million Dollar Man
Let’s do the chapter which’s summary has awoken the first inkling that I’ll probably read this from the beginning onward… Hmm is “implements” really the right word here? I cant ...
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Re: It's Finally Fall
Haha, right on time for winter starting, let me read your poem about autumn 😊 Correction, your song abt autumn! Have listened to the yt video too 😊 Hard disagree ...
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Re: Friman Mori — "little curvy line" my first poem in English
Alrighty, I am here for your poem’s been in the Green Room long enough! Let’s lift it out! I like the metaphor abt the line, definitely. It has the same ...
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Re: What’s gonna stop us? (Stuilly fanfic)
Idk where to watch Scream so you will have to bear with me once again lacking the exact context. It should be fine tho. I got experience now =D I ...
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Re: Chapter 2 Mayday Mayday
Ok after doing a bit of Green Room work to ease the conscience, we are so back =D Hm just a general tip, since you’re in limited POV you should ...
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Re: Abby walked out on Halloween night
And we are back to our usual shenanigans 😊 Hello! I find this one a rather weak intro to the story, especially this sentence here: “At least, that’s what everyone ...
Dec 4, 2025
