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Wow, Lenora742, First off, here is a belated but nonetheless, Welcome To YWS!! This is very thought provoking and I am perplexed. P.S. you did a fantabulous job and I ...

Hey Annapurna!!, I like the poem at the top. Also, did you draw that? It is really good! Great job! I love the scene portrayed. I love this. Great job! ...

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Hey Dragongirl!!, This is very nice...well, as nice as this sort of thing can be. I got the sense that you tried to take the bad thing and explain it ...

Hello Chrissy321!!, Just a few minor errors such as a space after a period and comma and I think to explain the man better you should say 30 year old ...

Thanks!! This is so meaningful! Thank you!

I have read it! It's awesome and different! Great job!

Thanks!

Thanks, Unknown!

Hey! I love the emotions here! I hope this continues at the fast pace that it does. The end is such a cliff hanger! Great job, though!

I love this! I love the description. My favorite is where you said there was venom in the girl's eyes. Great job!

Hey. So, This chapter is very......rational. Great job. I like the description! Keep writing! Awesome job!

I really like 1 and 4. Also, I'll look into your poems. I've noticed that recently, your work tends to be in the literary spotlight more times than not! Great ...

Thank you so much!

Thanks! I currently as working on one and ill pm you it!

Thanks a bunch, @ilovegeeks! Yes, this does help! I am currently writing a poem about trauma and how it has affected me. I have been abused and am putting feelings ...