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Hi Chrissy. So I really like this and the thing it is portraying. I like how you repeated lines to make a point. I think the formatting really could have ...

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Hi So, I'm not exactly sure what to say here except....you got your point made! Great job doing this. I know this will raise awareness for people to be more ...

Hi So, I'm not exactly sure what to say here except....you got your point made! Great job doing this. I know this will raise awareness for people to be more ...

Hi So, I'm not exactly sure what to say here except....you got your point made! Great job doing this. I know this will raise awareness for people to be more ...

Thank you! Yes, I thought about these things but wasn't sure how to change it on my paper where it would flow better....

Thank you! It took a lot of time and erasers...but, it was for a quiz grade for school. I sort of liked how it came to be and decided to ...

This was nice. The only thing I didn't like was how 'for' was repeated twice. Also that the beginnings aren't capitalized. If this was intentional, then it's fine. Anyway, this ...

Hey! Thanks for the review and I totally see what you are talking about. I may try to change this poem later on. I have little time as of now, ...

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Wow, Lenora742, First off, here is a belated but nonetheless, Welcome To YWS!! This is very thought provoking and I am perplexed. P.S. you did a fantabulous job and I ...