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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: Two Sides to Every Story

    Oh. Ok. I see what you mean. When I copied it over from my computer that weird typo must have not caught my eye and slipped past. I accidentally must ...

    Mar 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: Two Sides to Every Story

    Thanks!

    Mar 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Culture, Historical Fiction Re: Two Voice Poem

    Thanks! I like the idea to put one persons' speech in italics and the other in bold. That's a good idea. Thank you!

    Mar 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Culture, Historical Fiction Re: Two Voice Poem

    No! You helped a lot! I am still trying to decide between the matching lines. Thanks for the reviewing along with helping me! I chose this as the title: Two ...

    Mar 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: She Is Me

    Thanks!

    Feb 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: She Is Me

    Well, I didn't mean to make you sad.....although, that was sorta the poems intent....Anyway, I can't always PM you but I will try to be as much as I can! ...

    Feb 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: She Is Me

    Thanks! For the encouragement and good words!

    Feb 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: She Is Me

    Ok! And I added more, as well..thanks!

    Feb 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: She Is Me

    You did! Thanks!

    Feb 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Am Gone

    Also, I didn't say in those lines it was getting skinny. I said the thin edge was skinny-dipping in fresh blood.

    Feb 6, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Am Gone

    Thanks!

    Feb 6, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Am Gone

    Hey! Thanks so much! This really helps me IMMENSELY!

    Feb 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Am Gone

    Thanks and yes, I noticed that. I tried many times to make the lines more consistent. I think I'll just leave them how they are.

    Feb 5, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Follow the Wind

    Yes. Cool! I love this site because it doesn't matter how old you are for older or younger people to listen! In the real world, no one would ask my ...

    Jan 29, 2015
  • Short Story » Satire, Horror Re: To: Therapist From: Werewolf

    Ok! Thanks for clearing that up!

    Jan 28, 2015


Remember, a stranger once told you that the breeze here is something worth writing poems about.
— Shinji Moon