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I know that the introduction goes kind of fast but it's to set the environment and the feeling of the setting. Meep! Be harsh in your critisism if you must ...

I re-edited the introduction and I hope you like the new revisions, meep! Introduction It has been years since the day we met, so long ago with so many memories. ...

One thing I want to know is what does Matt look like? You start with foggy detail, to me anyway -I like detail-, and don't even describe him. I don't ...

It was an excellent second chapter and I'm relieved that this one did not move as fast as the first chapter did but you do need to edit alot. It ...

That was excellent. It had a good story-line and a firm idea. I like the whole concept of the them but it was a little vague. There were typos but ...