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Dear Journal. It’s been a long year since that horrible night when I was faced with the horrors of death. It was the most horrifying day of my life. I ...

Hey i like this poem alot, but i agree with everyone else. This would be much better if it was longer and had more mood. If you can explain love ...

Hey I loved this poem you wrote, its interesting and creative. The imagry was really good, and the writing style kept me on edge. Kepp up the excellent work, i ...

Wow this is such a good piece of writing. You style is so unique and interesting that i couldn`t stop reading it

I`m actually going to keep this as my beginning, because i need to add to it more, and make it more rounded and explanitory. So once I start explaining things ...

Hmmm Okay, so the tampon idea is a bit gross (just saying). It could probaly turn readers away from the book, expecially since the guy is so much older, and ...

I’ve never been to a funeral where it hasn’t rained. I remember passing funerals in my car, on a perfectly sunny day, and I remember asking myself, “where are the ...

I love the idea you had for the beginning, how did you think of it?

I agree the Karma at the end is wonderful, did you write this by yourself? i like how the chapter name is at the end, but your character is to ...

Ok first of all this is in the wrong section. If you dont know the different styles of writing you should learn them k. well it is sad, but if ...