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Okay sorry to say this but you come off like a needy girlfriend in this poem. Umm it seems like this is a to do list for guys you date, ...

I like this poem. It says it like things are. You are straight out about your feelings for the topic, and i admire you for your bravery. T

I undersatnd that this is your feelings, and you have shown them really well in this poem. You chose a good topic to write about because many can relate to ...

Here's my Haiku Haiku, hard to write But me, i beg to differ. Could be my talent. I love haikus

This poem made me confused... but i still like it :)

We were once the best of Friends. and nothing more. But lately, everything you do is making you the one i adore Your words will tell me one thing, but ...

This is a really good poem. I like the way its put together, God job T

I like it

I LOVED this so much. This has to be the best poem i've ever read on YWS, if i didn`t already agree with you when i started reading the poem, ...

I really like this piece of writing. Mainly because the animals are exactly how my pets are. I have a cat and a dog and they do the exact same ...

First time. Lead by a hand, through a door. Sh-sh-shaking, so nervous, nails nibbled raw. Mind racing, heart pounding. I shiver, never felt so naked. Blush painted cheeks Note: avoid ...

I really like what you've written, but it really should be more personal if its a diary, you should say more stuff thats on her mind. Also try and make ...

Hey Cole! i need points, aha. So i didn`t know you were gonn post anything like this , i didn`t even know you wrote anything like this. I guess it ...

I tried to space them but it wont work:( and thanks for the tip Kyte

This is really funny aha, clever lady.But how is this a story