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I really like it

Hey I love this poem, i can realate to the part when you said Had a father who was too suffocating; like a boa constrictor; [This is awkward.] "I always ...

Hey Oh my. This poem is amazing, a 10/10, a 100%. It was scary, and it freaked me out so much but i loved it, you have talent and i ...

Wow i really like this poem, its really sad. keep up the good work T

Hey I know that i already commented on this, but i love this Haiku so much, its awesome. I love it love love it, it is the best Haiku i've ...

Hey I like this poem, but it just seems like a story in stanza form. I feel as if you could make it flow more. T

Hey I really really like this. Its cute and funny, and sweet. Did you actually write this as a valentine to someone? Really creative, and nice to read Good Job ...

Hey Your so right, you didn't say you were the best, but your attitude said it for you. You take critisism in a bad way, why not use it to ...

I agree lake girls

Hey Wow i loved it. You really got the message to me, it is indeed a powerful peice of writing. To me it explains how people think they knoe someone ...

Hey Welcome to YWS. I really hate to tell you this but you are not acting like a real writer. You say you've been writing since you were born, and ...

Hey i really liked you poem alot, but i think you could put a little more emotion in your words. Then it will be alot better. Good Luck T

Hey You show talent when you write. I love this haiku i thought it was amazing, and i agree with you about the way you described the seasons. Good job ...

LOVED IT maybe its because i can relate to it like 100%, and it was really nice to see someone else write about something like this. I wrote i poem ...

Hey! I liked it. It was both creative and funny, in a modern day Dr.seuss kind of way. But i would suggest changing some words around. Good job T