TickledPink

Is this a riddle?

Huh?

I liked it.

Very , Dr. suess meets the little old lady who swallowed a fly

Hey Why did you put a rating on it lol? Its not like 14 year olds still believe that a stork brought them to their frontstep I'd probally undersatnd this ...

the way i wrote it was not to describe anything, i wanted people to read it and use they're own thoughts to undersatnd the poem, i didn't want to give ...

Hey i know i commented on it before, but i loved it!! just thought i'd tell you again.

I loved it.

Please review

Ya this site is only for 12 to 25. I really liked you poem though, you got talent.

Is this a part of a story that your going to write? If not i think you posted it in the wrong place. T

" shes one of those girls they're nothing but trouble just one look and now your seein double before you know it she'll be gon off to the next one" ...

By the way...are you really 100 years old? rofl

Hey aha i didn't really get it, and it kind of reminded me of robert munch, but i really liked it, keep up the good work T

I liked it. not much to critique about. Good job. T