TiannaJaneMorrison

Hey, thanks for letting me know the next chapter was up... here's my review! The summer took me by surprise and I wanted to do something exciting. I searched on ...

This was really good! I like the descriptions, even though there were a couple of words I didn't understand. :D One recommendation I have is to mark where you change ...

Hey, Solvalery! I noticed you were another new member and I thought I'd help you out with some editing and other stuff :) Anything red is just my little comments ...

This was really good! Everyone else has already picked up on the mistakes I noticed, so I'm just going to ask you to PM me when the next chapter is ...