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Re: The Night Isn't Always Quiet {prologue}
FOR ANYONE WHO WANTS TO REVIEW THIS, PLEASE IGNORE THE POEM AT THE START!! I ACCIDENTALLY ADDED IT WHEN I UPLOADED! SORRY! (Capitals are only so you notice this, because ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 3 (Draft #1)
Hey, thanks for letting me know the next chapter was up... here's my review! The summer took me by surprise and I wanted to do something exciting. I searched on ...
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: The Night Isn't Always Quiet {2}
CHAPTER TWO Memories Are The Gates To The Soul “ALRIGHT, MALLORY,” SAID LUCIEN AS HE STOOD, PULLING her up with him. “We're going to take you to see someone who ...
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: That awkward moment just before you go into a magic world.
This was really good! I like the descriptions, even though there were a couple of words I didn't understand. :D One recommendation I have is to mark where you change ...
Jun 10, 2010 -
Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 1 (Draft #1)
Hey, Solvalery! I noticed you were another new member and I thought I'd help you out with some editing and other stuff :) Anything red is just my little comments ...
Jun 10, 2010 -
Re: Your request makes me so happy!
The Night Isn't Always Quiet {prologue} The Night Isn't Always Quiet {1} Those are the two parts to my story The Night Isn't Always Quiet. If you could tell me ...
Jun 9, 2010 -
Re: The Story, The Song, and The Picture (prolouge)
This was really good! Everyone else has already picked up on the mistakes I noticed, so I'm just going to ask you to PM me when the next chapter is ...
Jun 9, 2010 -
Re: The Night Isn't Always Quiet {1}
CHAPTER ONE Daylight Doesn't Always Stop The Nightmares MALLORY WOKE WITH A GASP. THE DREAM HAD seemed so real. She shook her head and checked the time on her phone. ...
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: The Night Isn't Always Quiet {prologue}
I'll stop loving you When diamonds never sparkle And flowers cease to grow When thunder never echoes And rivers don't flow When hearts no longer wonder And hands are never ...
Jun 8, 2010
